Writing Goals

1. Use A-B transitions
2. Use more higher level words
3. Check for run on sentence ALWAYS

Friday, January 27, 2012

I learned not to mess with old women

Author’s note: I am writing about what I learned in Thank you, Ma’am

In the story Thank you, Ma’am what I learned from is that you shouldn’t try to steal peoples things. Or mess with older women cause they can kick your butt. Also don’t take people for granted just because they look hopeless and old doesn’t mean there strong and if you do this and they invite you to their house to watch his face you should except and if you had a chance to run don’t run unless they are doing something really bad to u.

1 comment:

  1. I think youtold me clearly what you learned but I was conffused about what the toppic was

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