Writing Goals
1. Use A-B transitions
2. Use more higher level words
3. Check for run on sentence ALWAYS
2. Use more higher level words
3. Check for run on sentence ALWAYS
Tuesday, February 22, 2011
Fall
Fall is the best I like the smell of it and pumpkins oh and u cant forget about cinnamon that’s good stuff I mean fall is also the fall worst time for me my great grandma died in the fall we did a lot of things had together like a couple of years back wendys had this game called Kirby air ride it was a little board game but it was fun we used to go over to her house and spend the whole day their. Usually when I got their I would go to her room get the game and grab like 20 mint peppermints and we would play the game she was usually blue I was green I would always win but to think of it I think she let me win well who cares fall is not that bye good for me
Friday, February 18, 2011
Essay response for Ordinary Boy
Have you ever wanted to be a superhero and your mom and dad are famous superheroes? I know I want to. Well Ben was one of those kids, he didn’t really have superpowers. He was a human kid like you and me. He and his friends collect cards that I guess have powers. And one card is very rare and a very evil person stole the card and they had to get it back. They traveled through volcanoes and more and still no card. As the story goes on it gets more interesting.
Professor Brain-Drain is on the loose! This super villain menaces the fine super citizens of Superopolis, concocting evil-genius schemes and draining everyone's brainpower! And in this town, there's not a whole lot of that to begin with. But the AMAZING INDESTRUCTO will save the day! He is indestructible! He cannot be harmed by anything! He is the town's greatest superhero! Collect all sixty-four of his trading cards!
In the town of Superopolis, everyone has a superpower. Everyone, that is, except Ordinary Boy. He's well, he's pretty much ordinary. But that won't stop him from taking on super villains like the sinister Professor Brain Drain.
The characters in this story are Ordinary Boy, Stench, Tadpole, Halogen Boy and Plasma Girl. Some villains are Professor Brain Drain, The Multiplier, The Deadly Dumbots, The Red Menace, Cyclotron, The SneakStickyfingers.
Professor Brain-Drain is on the loose! This super villain menaces the fine super citizens of Superopolis, concocting evil-genius schemes and draining everyone's brainpower! And in this town, there's not a whole lot of that to begin with. But the AMAZING INDESTRUCTO will save the day! He is indestructible! He cannot be harmed by anything! He is the town's greatest superhero! Collect all sixty-four of his trading cards!
In the town of Superopolis, everyone has a superpower. Everyone, that is, except Ordinary Boy. He's well, he's pretty much ordinary. But that won't stop him from taking on super villains like the sinister Professor Brain Drain.
The characters in this story are Ordinary Boy, Stench, Tadpole, Halogen Boy and Plasma Girl. Some villains are Professor Brain Drain, The Multiplier, The Deadly Dumbots, The Red Menace, Cyclotron, The SneakStickyfingers.
Tuesday, February 8, 2011
Other Places Ive been
Ive been to belize and jamica on a cruise it was so fun in belize we went cave tubing what u do is tht u go in a tube and u get to go down stream through a big dark cave. Their were lots of rocks so when are leader said butts up u better put ur but up or ur butt will be draging across the rocks which I really smooth but anyways in jamica we really didn’t do that much since it was about to storm really bad
Monday, February 7, 2011
Super Name
My favorite hero batman. He is just like a regular person he doesn’t have any superpowers but he does have nice toys. Like big guns and big mussels. He's fought a lot of bad guys. Hes fought Joker and two face. And hes faced reguar bad people. I also like spiderman but he got bit by a radioactive spider so know he shoots webs form his arms.
Scared
One time I was home alone and it was dark and I heard I thud form upstairs then a ring at the doorbell the I heard something strange to this very day I don’t know what it was but the I heard another thud so ran and hid under my table with a blanket over me then it when away so I went up stared and something ran past me and I felt wind but I know it was small so I turned around and I saw it was my cat he knocked over all my trophies so to this day when I hear a thud in my house 8i run screaming to a table with a blanket.
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