Writing Goals

1. Use A-B transitions
2. Use more higher level words
3. Check for run on sentence ALWAYS

Friday, January 27, 2012

I learned not to mess with old women

Author’s note: I am writing about what I learned in Thank you, Ma’am

In the story Thank you, Ma’am what I learned from is that you shouldn’t try to steal peoples things. Or mess with older women cause they can kick your butt. Also don’t take people for granted just because they look hopeless and old doesn’t mean there strong and if you do this and they invite you to their house to watch his face you should except and if you had a chance to run don’t run unless they are doing something really bad to u.

Thursday, January 12, 2012

Read it now!

Authors Note: This is a retelling piece for Dead Man’s Path

This book is about a man who gets an outstanding job a job he wanted for years. But when he sees the school he tries to change the whole entire school and gets the teachers to work for him. Later down the road he notices that people are walking around his school yard, one of his worst ideas ever was to shut down that path. From that point there is no return…..