Games are cool they can have good graphics and bad graphics. Its amazing how we started out as little kids thinking the GameCube or the Playstation was the best thing created. Then the playstation 2 came out and then a DS and then a x-box. So then we again thought we needed to have it and it was our life. Then the PSP came and the playstation 3 and the X-box 360. So know at my age(13)
We have X-box 360 and we say its our life its to die for. But in a couple of years there will be another cool game council and we will want that and soon enough will forget about the past game counsels.
Writing Goals
1. Use A-B transitions
2. Use more higher level words
3. Check for run on sentence ALWAYS
2. Use more higher level words
3. Check for run on sentence ALWAYS
Wednesday, April 13, 2011
Friday, April 8, 2011
Belize & Cruise
I love Belize. It is my favorite memory. We went there on a cruse and i had a blast. The best part about a cruise is that you dont have to make your bed and when they make your bed it is crisp and clean and it smells great. Another great thing is that if you go on a carnival cruise you get free icecream for youre whole trip. The other great things about it is that when you go on a carnival trip you people actually take you from our parents. Its not kidnapping its like child watch thing but better. When your older you get to do more fun stuff like stay after midnight and party all day long.
Thursday, April 7, 2011
Essay response “The Hundredth Dove”
What if you killed something that was special but you didn’t believe it. In “The Hundredth Dove” by Jane Yolen the same thing happened. This book is good because it’s not a boring short story like other ones. The background is maybe a couple 100 years ago. That’s another reason why I like the story is because I like stories that happen long time ago. The other background is in England.
The characters in The Hundredth Dove, there is really not a lot of them, but there’s a king a fowler whose name is Hugh there’s also doves a slim, elegant, and white as milk it was gray-blue and meaty dove. There was also the kings’ wife whose name is lady Columbia which means dove. The characters in this book are well described. I could really picture the characters in my mind.
The king is getting married in one week of time. Since the women’s name means dove, the king ordered the fowler or Hugh to catch 100 doves. He took his mission and everyday he caught at least 20 birds but he could never catch one dove he was the quickest of them all. This book (short story) is really good as I already said.
Just as I like that one little paragraph I like this whole book overall. I tried my best to tell you the best I can in telling this book. I think Janen Yolen is one of the best short story writers. What if you killed something that was special but you didn’t believe it. You probably will think twice before you kill something.
The characters in The Hundredth Dove, there is really not a lot of them, but there’s a king a fowler whose name is Hugh there’s also doves a slim, elegant, and white as milk it was gray-blue and meaty dove. There was also the kings’ wife whose name is lady Columbia which means dove. The characters in this book are well described. I could really picture the characters in my mind.
The king is getting married in one week of time. Since the women’s name means dove, the king ordered the fowler or Hugh to catch 100 doves. He took his mission and everyday he caught at least 20 birds but he could never catch one dove he was the quickest of them all. This book (short story) is really good as I already said.
Just as I like that one little paragraph I like this whole book overall. I tried my best to tell you the best I can in telling this book. I think Janen Yolen is one of the best short story writers. What if you killed something that was special but you didn’t believe it. You probably will think twice before you kill something.
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