Writing Goals

1. Use A-B transitions
2. Use more higher level words
3. Check for run on sentence ALWAYS

Monday, June 6, 2011

It was a normal day and I was shooting some hoops when I see my dad pull in to the driveway. I run up to him and I asked him what you doing here so early. And he said I’m going to pack, I started to moan because he always goes to trips with out us, but he said “Hey B you should come pack with me too.” When I asked him he said “we are all going to Florida.” I cheered with happiness. I ran inside packing my stuff and when I asked my dad what time are we leaving he said “3am,” I replied back that’s really early and he said “yes I know.”

After I got done packing for our last minute trip I went outside to see if my friends Josh and Kyle can come out and they couldn’t, neither could my other friend Jack. So I went to shooting hoops again. And to make the day better we went out to eat. We went to somewhere we haven’t eaten before and it was really good. After that we went home to go to sleep.

“RING RING RING” I woke up and I was really tired it was 3 am just like me dad said and so I got ready I took a quick shower and put my clothes on. I sat there for about 30 minutes to wait for my mom and dad to get ready and I remembered to wake my brother up so I went into his room and woke him up. And he was so much more tired than I was. He took like 20 minutes to get ready. When we were ready we took my moms PT cruiser. And we stooped for gas and some hot chocolate. It was really good and my brother thought so too. It took maybe 30 minutes to get there and we listed to some pop music. And I looked out my window and saw that there was barely anybody up, “well that kind of makes sense bailey it really early,” said my mom.

We got to the airport and we had to wait for my dad to park and get to the entrance witch takes about 15 minutes. So I sat down and played on my reclaim witch was a kind of cool phone. I was ready to fall asleep but I knew if I did I wouldn’t get up till 8am and it was 4:30am. And then my dad cam sop we waited in line till it was our turn to get our tickets. When we got our tickets we went up to our concourse and sat and waited till we had to leave and we got the airplane that has TV’s. But we got bumped off our flight so we got another set of tickets to go to Arizona .

And we tried another flight but we got bumped off that flight too. So my mom was about to say screw it we are leaving to go to home, but my dad came up with going to Colorado and then going to Arizona. So we tried that and we made that flight and we stooped for some lunch cause it was around 12. And we went to a Mexican restaurant and I got nachos they were good.