Authors Note: This is a summary about about the Hunger Games.
A girl Katniss, ends up having to go to the hunger games, a community tradition to fight to the death. Will she make it out alive? Or will she die before she is even close to finishing?
Writing Goals
1. Use A-B transitions
2. Use more higher level words
3. Check for run on sentence ALWAYS
2. Use more higher level words
3. Check for run on sentence ALWAYS
Tuesday, December 20, 2011
War comes to Hunger Games
Authors Note: This Is an essay comparing War Comes to Willy Freeman and Hunger Games
What if you had to head out to search for your mom because she was captured, and you have to go alone because you have witness your father’s death, or you’re sister has been nominated to the hunger games, but you take her place so she doesn’t die. Well in the book War Comes to Willy Freeman and Hunger Games, that is exactly what has happen in these two books. Willy ends up trying to find her mother, and Katniss ends up being in this game called Hunger Games, and you have to kill people to survive, and come out of this game.
In War Comes to Willy Freeman, she sets out to find her mother. Now in the book Hunger Games, Katniss doesn’t do the same thing she ends up trying to win this game, but one thing that they have in common is that they kill people, and there doing these events for their mom. Another thing that both characters have in common is the fact that both of their dads died, in a brutal way. In the beginning Willy helps her dad, just like Katniss helps her dad. The only difference Katnisse’s dad used to work for coal, and Willy’s dad fought for Americans.
Now what you would you say if that Willy and Katniss were almost exactly alike. Well they are they both love and care for their mom, there doing everything for there mom. There is a difference in War Comes to Willy Freeman and Hunger Games. Willy finds her mom, but she dies. But Katniss doesn’t need to find her mother she is in this game to help her mother, not save her.
Another reason they are similar but different is that Katniss has a sibling and Willy doesn’t. Willy doesn’t know what it feels like to have a brother or a sister to care for or to look up to. Katniss has a younger sister her name is Prim. She is about 10, so if you were in her eyes you would look up to your older sister Katniss. Katniss and Willy both have an animal to care for. Willy has a cow, but later she dies because she was stabbed by black people. Katniss has a cat who is very ugly, but she listens and she is one the best cats you could ever get.
It is coming to end for my essay and the overall essay is comparing the two books War Comes to Willy Freeman (Willy) and Hunger Games (Katniss and Prim.)
These two books I can relate to because I have a younger brother who looks up to me. And I had an animal who died because somebody killed it.
What if you had to head out to search for your mom because she was captured, and you have to go alone because you have witness your father’s death, or you’re sister has been nominated to the hunger games, but you take her place so she doesn’t die. Well in the book War Comes to Willy Freeman and Hunger Games, that is exactly what has happen in these two books. Willy ends up trying to find her mother, and Katniss ends up being in this game called Hunger Games, and you have to kill people to survive, and come out of this game.
In War Comes to Willy Freeman, she sets out to find her mother. Now in the book Hunger Games, Katniss doesn’t do the same thing she ends up trying to win this game, but one thing that they have in common is that they kill people, and there doing these events for their mom. Another thing that both characters have in common is the fact that both of their dads died, in a brutal way. In the beginning Willy helps her dad, just like Katniss helps her dad. The only difference Katnisse’s dad used to work for coal, and Willy’s dad fought for Americans.
Now what you would you say if that Willy and Katniss were almost exactly alike. Well they are they both love and care for their mom, there doing everything for there mom. There is a difference in War Comes to Willy Freeman and Hunger Games. Willy finds her mom, but she dies. But Katniss doesn’t need to find her mother she is in this game to help her mother, not save her.
Another reason they are similar but different is that Katniss has a sibling and Willy doesn’t. Willy doesn’t know what it feels like to have a brother or a sister to care for or to look up to. Katniss has a younger sister her name is Prim. She is about 10, so if you were in her eyes you would look up to your older sister Katniss. Katniss and Willy both have an animal to care for. Willy has a cow, but later she dies because she was stabbed by black people. Katniss has a cat who is very ugly, but she listens and she is one the best cats you could ever get.
It is coming to end for my essay and the overall essay is comparing the two books War Comes to Willy Freeman (Willy) and Hunger Games (Katniss and Prim.)
These two books I can relate to because I have a younger brother who looks up to me. And I had an animal who died because somebody killed it.
Tuesday, December 13, 2011
Why did you do that?
Authors note: This is a short response telling you Cause & Effect
My book War Comes to Willy Freeman is about a girl who ends up seeing her father die in front of her eyes. And her mother gets captured by the British, and is force to be a slave for the rest of her life or until she dies, whichever comes first. The only way she can go get her mom back home safely is by dressing as boy, undercover.
There are many cause’s and effect’s, such as her dad dying. Her mother being captured. One Cause and effect I’m going to tell you is Her dying. The cause was the town’s people in Fort Griswold were forced to fight for their land if they didn’t want to be slaves. So Willy’s dad was the second most powerfulness, so he went out to battle. When the town’s people were in there “castle” the red coats came in and killed everyone except for Willy. So the cause Is Willy’s dad goes into battle and the effect was that he dies or in other words “Murdered”
I hope I have told you everything about Cause and effect, this book reminds me of Alex rider. The cause is that his uncle died and because of that Alex has to become an agent to take his spot. He had to go through months of training, but now he is one the best agents on the team.
My book War Comes to Willy Freeman is about a girl who ends up seeing her father die in front of her eyes. And her mother gets captured by the British, and is force to be a slave for the rest of her life or until she dies, whichever comes first. The only way she can go get her mom back home safely is by dressing as boy, undercover.
There are many cause’s and effect’s, such as her dad dying. Her mother being captured. One Cause and effect I’m going to tell you is Her dying. The cause was the town’s people in Fort Griswold were forced to fight for their land if they didn’t want to be slaves. So Willy’s dad was the second most powerfulness, so he went out to battle. When the town’s people were in there “castle” the red coats came in and killed everyone except for Willy. So the cause Is Willy’s dad goes into battle and the effect was that he dies or in other words “Murdered”
I hope I have told you everything about Cause and effect, this book reminds me of Alex rider. The cause is that his uncle died and because of that Alex has to become an agent to take his spot. He had to go through months of training, but now he is one the best agents on the team.
Thursday, December 8, 2011
All about Point of View
Author’s notes: This is a short response about my book War comes to Willy Freeman
What if you saw your father die before your eyes, and you run over to your house searching for your mother, then soon found out she was captured. In the book War Comes to Willy Freeman. Willy is a young girl who witnesses her father’s death, after she made it home she found out something almost as bad as her father’s death. Her mother has been captured; Willy soon set out on a journey to look for her mother, not as a girl though, undercover as a boy.
First, Willy has witnessed her father’s death, which affects her greatly. Another event that hurts her same as her father dying is that when she arrived to her house she searched for her mother but she was nowhere. She finds out that her mother has been captured. This affects her because after Will see’s her father’s death she comes home and found out that her mom has been captured.
This book would be completely different if the point of view is about Captain Ivers. He wanted Willy’s family and other black families to be slaves, but he was mad at Willy’s family because they were free because her dad was with the Americans.
What if you saw your father die before your eyes, and you run over to your house searching for your mother, then soon found out she was captured. In the book War Comes to Willy Freeman. Willy is a young girl who witnesses her father’s death, after she made it home she found out something almost as bad as her father’s death. Her mother has been captured; Willy soon set out on a journey to look for her mother, not as a girl though, undercover as a boy.
First, Willy has witnessed her father’s death, which affects her greatly. Another event that hurts her same as her father dying is that when she arrived to her house she searched for her mother but she was nowhere. She finds out that her mother has been captured. This affects her because after Will see’s her father’s death she comes home and found out that her mom has been captured.
This book would be completely different if the point of view is about Captain Ivers. He wanted Willy’s family and other black families to be slaves, but he was mad at Willy’s family because they were free because her dad was with the Americans.
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