Writing Goals

1. Use A-B transitions
2. Use more higher level words
3. Check for run on sentence ALWAYS

Tuesday, December 14, 2010

Response to “Mary Poppins”

Imagine if you had a nanny who had magic and she could make your bed almost as fast as light. Having a nanny like that would certainly make life easier. In “Mary Poppins’’ by P.L. Travers is very noticeable that “Mary Poppins’’ is a true romantic movie. The plotline, symbolism, and characteristics of the movie stir together really good to make it a romantic mode of literature.

The plotline of the movie, “Mary Poppins” clearly follows the romantic mode of literature. It starts out with a minor conflict which is that the family no longer has a nanny. The very next day they find a nanny and her name is “Mary Poppins.” She is a fine woman who has magic so that little minor conflict turns into a life symbolism. Just as the plotline of “Mary Poppins” follows the romantic mode of literature, so does the symbolism.

In the begging the father was mean and only cared about his job but with ‘’Mary Poppins” magical ways the dad realizes that his children are more important to him than his job. There are so many symbolisms that it’s a much watch romantic movie. It made me cry it was such a romantic movie. Symbolism is great in a romantic movie but the characteristics are better.

The characteristics are mean, happy, sad, but they stir together really good to make a perfect romantic movie. There is really nothing to talk about for characteristics because there really aren’t a lot of them but once again you need to watch the perfect romantic movie.

Friday, December 10, 2010

My dad

What makes me feel safe is my dad. He used to be in the air force so he's pretty well trained. He has a gun in the house I think I'm not to sure one day I want to find it but I sure he doesn’t have one in the house. Where we lived in GA was cool except we had robbers in our neighborhood, but they never got caught until one day that’s when my dad went to their house and saw everything that was reported. So he's an awesome idol. I want to be some what like him, he is the base manager for Frontier and Midwest they are the same thing but he still is the base manager for both. He's an awesome dad!

Thursday, December 9, 2010

Pariots are bad

My least favorite NFL football team would have to be the New England Patriots.They cheat in many ways and they have heart and everything its just they don’t care about their players.That is why I don’t like them!

Wednesday, December 1, 2010

Snow

Snow is cool i havent seen it in a while i wish we werent in school right no cause i want to go outside and play in the snow. If u dont know what snow is it is white and it comes down from the sky and if your lucky it sticks to the ground and if ur even luckyer you can have a snow day. I cam from the south and i didnt see snow that much so it pretty cool to see snow in the north.

LET IT SNOW!!!!!!!!!!! LET IT SNOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!! LET IT SNOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!