Would you like to live in Canada? In my opinion, there are both beneficial and negatives reasons of living there and I am going to explain to you with a compare and contrast five paragraph essay my stance on this topic.
First, I would not like to live in Canada because I’m not a Justin Bieber fan. Although I don’t express my feelings towards him, it would be kind of cool to move there because of Justin Bieber. He is a big hit from there so I bet you can see his house. People will also tell you where the producers asked him to join the music bid which would be exhilarating.
Second, Canada is the 2nd largest country in the world. It also has a couple of historic places like Vancouver where the Olympics were held at two years ago. In addition, they have the Niagara Falls, which so happens to be the most beautiful place in the world. I’ve never been there but my family has and they told me that it’s a romantic and a very nice landmark.
Furthermore, the capital of Canada is Ottawa. It is really big and full of people and animal life. I would love to go there one day when I have enough money. Moreover, Ottawa is the best place to sell or buy something you get them for cheap prices. Since Canada is so big, they have six time zones. Canada is basically a smaller size of the USA except we have states and they do not.
Overall, I would like to move to Canada for the rest of my life, but I can’t because I have to live here in Wisconsin. There is really no difference between here and Canada. However, Canada is a lot bigger than any other state in the USA and that’s what makes Canada so unique.
Writing Goals
1. Use A-B transitions
2. Use more higher level words
3. Check for run on sentence ALWAYS
2. Use more higher level words
3. Check for run on sentence ALWAYS
Wednesday, February 15, 2012
Thursday, February 9, 2012
Cole before :/ Cole now :)
Authors note: This is going to be a short response for the below quote.
“I don’t need to prove anything from now on I’m telling the truth” – Cole Matthews
In these 3 paragraphs I’m going to tell you how he has changed but you should know the background. Cole has robbed a hardware store and a witness saw this happen, his name was Peter. After he told, Cole got busted but when he found out who told he went up to Peter and disabled Peter, all because her told. When he went to court the judge gave him two options, go to prison for 3 years, or go to southern Alaska for a year and have limited supplies
Cole has changed a lot throughout this entire novel. In the beginning he was a rude person didn’t care for anyone but himself lied about everything, but that changed when he went to Alaska. I think he started to change after he nearly died by getting attacked by the bear. He said this when he was able to leave “I don’t need to prove anything from now on I’m telling the truth.” This character is defiantly a dynamic character.
My short response is coming to the end and this has told you why Cole has changed and also what type of character he is and why. This book reminds me of Greg Hefley, he lied a lot and did bad things, except he didn’t go to Alaska he still learned that he needs to change for people not to hate him or dis-like him.
“I don’t need to prove anything from now on I’m telling the truth” – Cole Matthews
In these 3 paragraphs I’m going to tell you how he has changed but you should know the background. Cole has robbed a hardware store and a witness saw this happen, his name was Peter. After he told, Cole got busted but when he found out who told he went up to Peter and disabled Peter, all because her told. When he went to court the judge gave him two options, go to prison for 3 years, or go to southern Alaska for a year and have limited supplies
Cole has changed a lot throughout this entire novel. In the beginning he was a rude person didn’t care for anyone but himself lied about everything, but that changed when he went to Alaska. I think he started to change after he nearly died by getting attacked by the bear. He said this when he was able to leave “I don’t need to prove anything from now on I’m telling the truth.” This character is defiantly a dynamic character.
My short response is coming to the end and this has told you why Cole has changed and also what type of character he is and why. This book reminds me of Greg Hefley, he lied a lot and did bad things, except he didn’t go to Alaska he still learned that he needs to change for people not to hate him or dis-like him.
Tuesday, February 7, 2012
Speech
•Conflict: Explain to the audience one major conflict in your novel, and discuss 2-3 possible resolutions. Make sure to include whether this conflict is person vs. person, person vs. self, person vs. society, or person vs. nature.
Touching Spirt Bear is about a kid who named Cole who almost beats a kid to death for ratting on him, when he goes to court he has 2 decisions to go to prison or go to the south of Alaska and stay there for one year where no one can find him, he decides to choose the 2nd choice. One major conflict is when Cole gets attacked by the bear. A resolution would be that he will kill the bear while he is asleep, he will get up in the middle of the night and he will sneak over to where the bear is hiding and he will either have the chance to kill it and he does or he has the chance but he doesn’t because he thinks back to the birds dying when the tree gets stuck by. This conflict would have to be person vs. nature, because, he was in the wild which is nature.
Touching Spirt Bear is about a kid who named Cole who almost beats a kid to death for ratting on him, when he goes to court he has 2 decisions to go to prison or go to the south of Alaska and stay there for one year where no one can find him, he decides to choose the 2nd choice. One major conflict is when Cole gets attacked by the bear. A resolution would be that he will kill the bear while he is asleep, he will get up in the middle of the night and he will sneak over to where the bear is hiding and he will either have the chance to kill it and he does or he has the chance but he doesn’t because he thinks back to the birds dying when the tree gets stuck by. This conflict would have to be person vs. nature, because, he was in the wild which is nature.
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