Authors note: This is a letter to casey about his mistake that he made
Dear Casey,
I’m writing you a letter because; I’m too disappointed to tell you this to your face. We had a very close game, I mean it was a good game till you came up to bat thinking you’re the best and going to win the ball game with a home-run. You have been a great player and a awesome season and we made it all the way to the last playoff game, and you made us lose! For that reason and that reason only I can trade you to the Cleveland Indians or take 2 million of your salary. And if you think you get more money your wrong they will pay you only a 100 dollars more. They want you for some reason and I’m giving you the decision, and I look forward to see you at the conference to make your final decision.
Sincerely,
Coach Kennedy
Writing Goals
1. Use A-B transitions
2. Use more higher level words
3. Check for run on sentence ALWAYS
2. Use more higher level words
3. Check for run on sentence ALWAYS
Monday, October 31, 2011
Football is great
"Build up your weaknesses until they become your strong points.”
Authors note this is a essay about why football is great
There are many reasons why football is the best sport ever. I’m going to tell you three main reasons why football is the greats sport. I will also back it up.
First, you can use your anger or problems that you had in football when you tackle someone. For example if you had a bad day at school or home you usually feel really angry and you can use that as your motivation when you’re playing. Sometimes I have that feeling and I let all my anger out.
Second, when you are good and you play through your kid year and high school year you could play collage or NFL football. For example if you were JJ Watt who played through his kid year and high school, Collage and is currently playing in the NFL. Where he is making thousands of dollars just for playing because when you’re that good you actually get paid.
Last and most important, it’s a great way to learn to be a team a family and find each other strengths and weakness and help them out with their weakness and make it better. Therefore you have to know each of your team mates front and back and treat each person like family and you have to know each and every play so you know what to do in a game so you don’t let your team/family down.
In conclusion in football your team is like your family and you can’t let them down. That is one of the many reasons why football is the best sport.
Authors note this is a essay about why football is great
There are many reasons why football is the best sport ever. I’m going to tell you three main reasons why football is the greats sport. I will also back it up.
First, you can use your anger or problems that you had in football when you tackle someone. For example if you had a bad day at school or home you usually feel really angry and you can use that as your motivation when you’re playing. Sometimes I have that feeling and I let all my anger out.
Second, when you are good and you play through your kid year and high school year you could play collage or NFL football. For example if you were JJ Watt who played through his kid year and high school, Collage and is currently playing in the NFL. Where he is making thousands of dollars just for playing because when you’re that good you actually get paid.
Last and most important, it’s a great way to learn to be a team a family and find each other strengths and weakness and help them out with their weakness and make it better. Therefore you have to know each of your team mates front and back and treat each person like family and you have to know each and every play so you know what to do in a game so you don’t let your team/family down.
In conclusion in football your team is like your family and you can’t let them down. That is one of the many reasons why football is the best sport.
Tuesday, October 25, 2011
I'm proud for the "USA"
Authors note: This is a paragraph about why I’m proud for my country
A lot of people would say their proud of their country many will say no, but I'm one of the people who are saying yes I'm proud of my country
I'm proud of my country for many reasons, a reason why is because we were searching for Bin laden, and when we found him we went into his land and killed him. I'm so proud of the brave men that did that. The only bad part was that we went to do that mission ended up dying (shoot down.) Another reason would be that we have the option to choose our leader some cant, and they could end up starting a war that you never did it when it could have been the leaders fault, and if he makes up this law, we have people who can reject this law or accept this law. Lastly, we have people who turn 18 and then go to the military not collage, they don’t really care about their life’s all they really care about is that there fighting for their country, and they know that there making their family and more people proud.
So when I say I’m proud of my country I mean it I’m not one those people who say they are but in their head they deny it.
A lot of people would say their proud of their country many will say no, but I'm one of the people who are saying yes I'm proud of my country
I'm proud of my country for many reasons, a reason why is because we were searching for Bin laden, and when we found him we went into his land and killed him. I'm so proud of the brave men that did that. The only bad part was that we went to do that mission ended up dying (shoot down.) Another reason would be that we have the option to choose our leader some cant, and they could end up starting a war that you never did it when it could have been the leaders fault, and if he makes up this law, we have people who can reject this law or accept this law. Lastly, we have people who turn 18 and then go to the military not collage, they don’t really care about their life’s all they really care about is that there fighting for their country, and they know that there making their family and more people proud.
So when I say I’m proud of my country I mean it I’m not one those people who say they are but in their head they deny it.
Friday, October 14, 2011
Football is great
“Build up your weaknesses until they become your strong points.”
There are many reasons why football is the best sport ever. I’m going to tell you three main reasons why football is the greats sport. I will also back it up.
First, you can use your anger or problems that you had in football when you tackle someone. For example if you had a bad day at school or home you usually feel really angry and you can use that as your motivation when you’re playing. Sometimes I have that feeling and I let all my anger out.
Second, when you are good and you play through your kid year and high school year you could play collage or NFL football. For example if you were JJ Watt who played through his kid year and high school, Collage and is currently playing in the NFL. Where he is making thousands of dollars just for playing because when you’re that good you actually get paid.
Last and most important, it’s a great way to learn to be a team a family and find each other strengths and weakness and help them out with their weakness and make it better. Therefore you have to know each of your team mates front and back and treat each person like family and you have to know each and every play so you know what to do in a game so you don’t let your team/family down.
In conclusion in football your team is like your family and you can’t let them down. That is one of the many reasons why football is the best sport.
There are many reasons why football is the best sport ever. I’m going to tell you three main reasons why football is the greats sport. I will also back it up.
First, you can use your anger or problems that you had in football when you tackle someone. For example if you had a bad day at school or home you usually feel really angry and you can use that as your motivation when you’re playing. Sometimes I have that feeling and I let all my anger out.
Second, when you are good and you play through your kid year and high school year you could play collage or NFL football. For example if you were JJ Watt who played through his kid year and high school, Collage and is currently playing in the NFL. Where he is making thousands of dollars just for playing because when you’re that good you actually get paid.
Last and most important, it’s a great way to learn to be a team a family and find each other strengths and weakness and help them out with their weakness and make it better. Therefore you have to know each of your team mates front and back and treat each person like family and you have to know each and every play so you know what to do in a game so you don’t let your team/family down.
In conclusion in football your team is like your family and you can’t let them down. That is one of the many reasons why football is the best sport.
Monday, October 3, 2011
Casey at Bat
Dear Casey,
I’m writing you a letter because; I’m too disappointed to tell you this to your face. We had a very close game, I mean it was a good game till you came up to bat thinking you’re the best and going to win the ball game with a home-run. You have been a great player and a awesome season and we made it all the way to the last playoff game, and you made us lose! For that reason and that reason only I can trade you to the Cleveland Indians or take 2 million of your salary. And if you think you get more money your wrong they will pay you only a 100 dollars more. They want you for some reason and I’m giving you the decision, and I look forward to see you at the conference to make your final decision.
Sincerely,
Coach Kennedy
I’m writing you a letter because; I’m too disappointed to tell you this to your face. We had a very close game, I mean it was a good game till you came up to bat thinking you’re the best and going to win the ball game with a home-run. You have been a great player and a awesome season and we made it all the way to the last playoff game, and you made us lose! For that reason and that reason only I can trade you to the Cleveland Indians or take 2 million of your salary. And if you think you get more money your wrong they will pay you only a 100 dollars more. They want you for some reason and I’m giving you the decision, and I look forward to see you at the conference to make your final decision.
Sincerely,
Coach Kennedy
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