Writing Goals

1. Use A-B transitions
2. Use more higher level words
3. Check for run on sentence ALWAYS

Tuesday, December 13, 2011

Why did you do that?

Authors note: This is a short response telling you Cause & Effect

My book War Comes to Willy Freeman is about a girl who ends up seeing her father die in front of her eyes. And her mother gets captured by the British, and is force to be a slave for the rest of her life or until she dies, whichever comes first. The only way she can go get her mom back home safely is by dressing as boy, undercover.
There are many cause’s and effect’s, such as her dad dying. Her mother being captured. One Cause and effect I’m going to tell you is Her dying. The cause was the town’s people in Fort Griswold were forced to fight for their land if they didn’t want to be slaves. So Willy’s dad was the second most powerfulness, so he went out to battle. When the town’s people were in there “castle” the red coats came in and killed everyone except for Willy. So the cause Is Willy’s dad goes into battle and the effect was that he dies or in other words “Murdered”
I hope I have told you everything about Cause and effect, this book reminds me of Alex rider. The cause is that his uncle died and because of that Alex has to become an agent to take his spot. He had to go through months of training, but now he is one the best agents on the team.

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