Writing Goals

1. Use A-B transitions
2. Use more higher level words
3. Check for run on sentence ALWAYS

Monday, March 7, 2011

Essay response for chapters 1-3 hunger games

A place that was North America is now known as Panem. The characters live in district 12 other known as the seam. So far Suzanne has lived through starvation. Once every 500 years their district they pick 12 boys and 12 girls. Effie who draws the names who go first and the kids, and she out of 11 girls picked Suzanne little sister prim. Whoever wins the hunger games gets showered with food for a whole 500 years.

Suzanne took prims’ place and stopped the arena; they never get a volunteer because the hunger game is a death mach. When Suzanne was ready to go up their she started to shed a few tears. When the name was called who she had to kill (or at least try) she had a flash back. It was one were her opponent he was trying to give the bread to her but the mother is very strict about him hanging around with the poor even though he’s poor, his father owns a bakery. That didn’t stop peeta from giving her bread to her they were set for a least a week. After Suzanne’s father died in a mine accident her mother was to desperate to even get out of her bed, but Suzanne was able to get her to eat, then she snapped out of her flash back she’s in reality now and she knew she had to kill the boy.

Before they started to fight they had to go to a bigger district because this was going to be a good mach so it took them one day to get to district 1 they have never rode in a car so it was new for them. When they got their they was a big feast it was also new for them too after that they went swimming but peeta ended up puking in the pool.

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