Writing Goals

1. Use A-B transitions
2. Use more higher level words
3. Check for run on sentence ALWAYS

Tuesday, March 15, 2011

Elmo VS E.T. 2

Like in the other post Elmo destroyed E.T. but he came back by one person barney…….barney saw some dust then he started singing ''I love you love me'' then E.T. came back to life and barney and E.T. formed as a team, while Elmo is not knowing what's happing he is just sitting in his room watching Big Time Rush, and out of no where E.T. And barny swarmed in like the army and started punching Elmo and they tied him up, but two days went by and he broke out he faked being dead even though he was alive, so they thru him out but elmo got up started singing E.T. and barney saw and elmo ran away


lmo and then tied him to a chair. They put oil on him and the chair and oil starting from the kitchen so it looks like the kitchen exploded and they didn’t do anything. When barney laid down mach the oil started to turn on fire but elmo knows what coming so he hops in the chair till he reaches the window then he jumps and lands on the four sticks chair. And the rope broke and elmo ran away but barny was trying to catch up to him but elmo ran in front of a car and he jumped and it missed him but when barny tried he got hit and he was laying their but E.T. made him better, but elmo got away.

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