Writing Goals

1. Use A-B transitions
2. Use more higher level words
3. Check for run on sentence ALWAYS

Friday, January 14, 2011

Journal Refelction

The story is good and bad. Good because it action and suspense and the stir really ties in unlike other books. Bad because its slow and it just makes me tired. In the book there are mixed emotions. Kino is usually mad or sad he's never happy in the book so far. Now Juana is happy and sad she is mostly sad because she thinks her baby is going to die of poison but the baby is really fine the doctor just wants the pearl because they call it the pearl of the world. I really didn’t understand the story in the end but my frreinds helped me. The story is very good now it suspense to me and now I really do like the story.

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