Deep Water

If you were drowning would that feel good to you? Well in deep water by William O. Douglas this boy is afraid of water and he doesn’t know how to swim so one day he tried to learn how to swim. He swam back and forth for hours. But he had a flash back of when he started to be scared of water and how it affected him well water plowed over him and he couldn’t breathe and the water just kept hitting him and his dad kept smiling. Well this is just beginning but the middle is a little better.
This boy is very brave he went alone to YMCA where he learns how to swim. Well he just waited for more people to come well there comes a 17 year old, and he threw him into the deep end. Well remember he can’t swim so he was thrown into the deep end and he started drowning. Well when he hits bottom he will come up just like you pop a cork of a bottle of wine when it hits new years. Well when he hit bottom he tried to shoot up but it ended up him being slow like a 3 toed sloth.
There are not a lot of characters in this story but there is a mom, dad, a teenager, and a swimming teacher. Well the mom and the dad got divorced and when the little boy visited his dad he was surfing and he lost control then when he fell he kept getting hit by water and almost got killed. Well a couple years later he lives with his mom. The teenager throws the little boy to the deep end. And the swimming teacher teaches the little boy how to swim and he would practice 1 hour every hour. Then he learned how to swim.
Now I advise you to read deep water I read it and it was really good. I think teachers should give this to students and let them read it it is a very good short story the best I’ve ever read I can say that.