Writing Goals

1. Use A-B transitions
2. Use more higher level words
3. Check for run on sentence ALWAYS

Friday, March 16, 2012

Cole we are cool

Authors Note: This is a letter back to Cole describing how he has changed and who he has affected because of his actions

To Cole Matthews,

Hey Cole, it’s me Peter Driscal I wanted to let you know that I accept your apology, and yes I will have lunch with you, but first I have a few things to say to you. One do you know how much you affected me after beating me up, I learned that sometimes I need to not tell people bad things, but start telling the good things, after you beat me up. And when I was fully healthy, I went to the gym, I went and basically changed my whole life style because of you. For the first time in my life I feel good about myself. I also went to your house a couple of months ago and I said to your mom and dad that I didn’t care what your son did to me and there is no need to punish him. And your dad’s reaction was “Shut up kid leave me alone” after that I kind of know why you beat me up, I think your dad does the same thing that you did to me but to you. Oh ya, your dad and mom are so mad it’s not funny. I think next time you should think before you do something because you affected not only me but your friends and your parents.

Sincerely,

Peter Driscal

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