Writing Goals

1. Use A-B transitions
2. Use more higher level words
3. Check for run on sentence ALWAYS

Wednesday, October 20, 2010

“Does patriotism still matter?”

Does patriotism still matter because why are we still fighting in the war? What would happen if we didn’t have heart for our country and our people? We couldn’t survive one week without caring for our country and our people.

In addition to that without patriotism it would affect me, you, and everybody else because one person can ruin patriotism. If your mom isn’t patriotic then the kids will do what your mom said, then when you grow up you would tell your kids not to be patriotic they will listen to you cause you’re their mom and or dad. I just now told you that one person can ruin patriotism.

As were in the war a lot of people are giving up cause people really don’t care about patriotism cause one people think we are losing in the war, and they think we’re going to lose and when that happens the people who won the war will make us not patriotic, so it can and it is affecting us in the war. Another reason why we are losing cause we the people are giving up for the soldiers so when they hear that they think too much about how nobody cares about them, but the military should be thinking about when they get home their family is proud of them and not only that the United states of America is proud of them.

As the years go on were slowly losing patriotism. What we can do to bring back patriotism back is get the teachers to get their kids to look at the flag hard and right good 3 to 4 paragraphs. For the kids that don’t go to school for their reasons, parents if they are old enough you should take them to the grave yard and look at all the soldiers or the veterans who fought for our country, then they should right a good hard 3 to 4 paragraphs, if their younger and not in school watch a PG or a G movie about patriotism, and get them to talk about what they just watched. You don’t have to if you don’t want to do this, but It could help.

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